that you have. It's ok to have it after the front page but I don't think it's necessary to have it ... As you mention in the part Future work, it maybe ... When I think about playing a multimedia game I would imagine that I wouldn't move around that ...
Master Thesis Opposition Report Opportunistic multihop communication using mobile platforms for very sparse infrastructures Student: Francois Willame Opponent: Thomas Essén
Organisation and structure The report is devided into five parts: Introduction, Context and system models, Simulation method and results, Performance measurement, Conclusions and future work. It is easy to find in the report because the structure of the report has the form that can be expected from a technical report.
Background and previous work A good introduction is given where multihopping is described and compared to other transmission techniques, advantages are discussed and applications are proposed. This gives a good background, but I would like to have a better explanation of Previous work. One important purpose of a master thesis is to make a contribution to the research in the subject. Without a good overview of Previous work in the report it is difficult to understand the contributions of this work. You have a section were you write about related work, it is good but I think you should be even more precise and give efforts to explain what have been done and what your thesis will contribute with. On the other hand a big number of references are given and all context in the report is well rooted in the scientific literature.
Method Simulations have been done to study the performance of the networks. The methods have been explained in a systematic way and the assumptions have been motivated.
Results and Conclusions The results from the simulations are plotted in clear and very good figures, but it’s a shame the text is hard to read. I would recommend you to increase the font of the text in the figures in the results part. In Appendix A you introduce an “Urban environment model”, and in Appendix B you have plotted the performance in an environment like that. Why not have the results of the “Urban environment model” in the result part in the report, and not in an Appendix? Some of the plots are superfluous and could be removed, for example it is not necessary to have one plot in the report, and the same plot in one Appendix with only a few revisions.
Language and layout I have made suggestions of improvements in the language in a printed version of the report that you’ll get with a few comments of the report are given as well. The report has a really good layout. But I don’t see a point in having that many blank pages that you have. It’s ok to have it after the front page but I don’t think it’s necessary to have it between all sections.
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The delay tolerant multimedia game is considered. As you mention in the part Future work, it maybe isn’t realistic to use the mobility model with pedestrians and vehicles. When I think about playing a multimedia game I would imagine that I wouldn’t move around that much. Can you motivate your mobility model? Is a multimedia game really the right application for a system that you have simulated? As you suggested in your presentation, the military could benefit from your results. Write about that!
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A list of abbreviations would be appreciated. What is SCN for example?
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One thing I didn’t find out in the report was the transmission capacity of the MCN. How long time does it take for a MCN to resubmit a data packet? Do you neglect the transmission time?
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Here epidemic routing is considered. That’s probably not the most efficient routing scheme. It’s outside of the scope of your master thesis but still it would be interesting to hear about your opinion how much the system can be improved with a better routing algorithm.
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