Corrigé

And Justice There is None

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Réponses Moving in + line 40

In England, in London

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a- a girl = the new neighbours’ daughter/ The black girl/ the girl in the West Indian family/ the West Indian girl b- her = the main character/ Poppy’s daughter/ the Polish girl refuser ‘the narrator’ c- they = the new neighbours/ the West Indian family / the black family/ the new family d- he= the main character’s father/ the girl’s father/ the father e- Poppy = idem

Points A = 3 b= 3 Cohérence entre a et b Sinon 0 Info repérée = 4 inutile de rédiger A=2 B=2 C=2 D=2 E=2

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a- Poppy’s daughter/ the main (female) character // the girl a- 2 + Line 13: “it seemed to her” / line 4-5 : “the deep color of the quotation=1 bittersweet chocolate her mother used for baking” / line 16 “the street seemed suddenly lifeless without them” line 18 (she would tell…) line 23 (yes, there he was) b- Polish : line 34-35 “the things that reminded him of the old county b- 2 + : the smell of…..Polish folk art” quotation= 1 accepter “men reading Polish newspapers” line 24 enlever 0.5 si ligne non précisée

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She is on her doorstep/ outside her house/ in her street. Accepter 4 aussi inside, at home, behind the window a- She is both impatient and frustrated. Mais comme le moment a- 5 n’est pas precise accepter aussi : excited, curious, inquisitive. b- Line 17-18 : she hugged herself in frustration »/ line 18 : « she would tell someone, then, but who?” / line 21: “leaping b- 3 (1.5 si from the steps, she ran” un seul Faire attention à la cohérence entre a et b. + 2 éléments élément) suffisent enlever 0.5 si

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ligne non précisée Then , she goes to the café where her father is a regular patron/ usually is to tell him about the new neighbours/ to talk to him (because she wants to..)

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He doesn’t expect to see her there so he wonders what may have Reaction =5 happened. / He frowns when he sees her come into the café/ He (4+1 wonders why she is coming/ He asks her if there’s something expression) wrong. He is (easily) worried, rather pessimistic, anxious, concerned. Personality = 5 Line 27: “her father looked up, frowning” / line 278: “What are you (4+1) doing here…wrong?” / line 29 “He always thought something was Quotation = 2 wrong.” / line 29-30: “She supposed he worried so…the war” enlever 0.5 si ligne non précisée

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9 Right or Wrong? 1- W- line 34- 35 “…till he clung…country” 2- W – line 30-31: “ newly demobbed / had arrived with her mother “ 3- R – line 31 : “determined to put the war…..silversmith” 4- R- line 33-34: “…he had done well. Better than ….in the café.”

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What = 4 (3 comp. + 1 expr.) What for = 4 (3 comp. + 1 expr.)

Coherence R/W et quotation 2 2

2 2 à chaque fois , -0.5 si ligne oubliée She doesn’t want to be heard . She knows that the people around her 6 don’t like West Indians so she fears their reactions. / She is compréhension embarrassed 2 expression line 45: The father fears that the newcomers might create problems/ 5 comp. + 2 meet the neighbours’ hostility. He may be prejudiced against West expr. Indians. Line 46: Positive point of view + she is impressed. (positive 5 comp. + 2 words + metaphors in the description) line 4, 7-8, 13-14 expr. (exotic) ,15, 16. I might mean new friends (line 11: “ a girl (2.5 seulement about her age”) si il n’y a pas d’éléments ou si il n’y a pas d’expr. Perso.) She might feel disappointed at her father’s reluctance, disapprove of 9 compr. his prejudice. She won’t obey her father. She will try to make new + friends with her children. 3 expression