6è - Correction du contrôle d’expression écrite (letter to selection board about the comic strip competition) Recopie la ou les phrases en corrigeant la ou les erreurs :

1. My hero is the God of war : his name is Kratos. My hero is the God of war : his name is Kratos. 2. His eyes are red and a long nose. His eyes are red and he has got a long nose. 3. His hair is short blond hair and blue eyes. His hair is short and blond and he has got blue eyes. 4. He has got round face and small nose. He has got a round face and a small nose. 5. He is strong and tall but he doesn’t big. He is strong and tall but he isn’t big. 6. His name Baptiste-man. Is thin and not very tall but he really strong. His name is Baptiste-man. He is thin and not very tall but he is really strong. 7. She hair is long and black and she eyes brown. Her hair is long and black and her eyes are brown. 8. She is blond hair and his blue eyes. She has got blond hair and her eyes are blue 9. He’s got thin, not very strong and tall. He is thin, not very strong and tall. 10.He’s clothes are green and a short straight hair. His clothes are green and he has got short straight hair. 11.His name is Catwoman. She is really strong. Her name is Catwoman. She is really strong. 12.His name is Morgane, he is not very strong, his hair is long. Her name is Morgane, she is not very strong, her hair is long. 13.My hero his name is Dr Lighttaller. His a green eyes. My hero’s name is Dr Lighttaller. His eyes are green. Fais plusieurs phrases : 14.She name is Katy. She is short blond hair, is round face slim tall and strong. Her name is Katy. She has got short blond hair. Her face is round. She is slim, tall and strong. 15.His hair is short brown hair, round face, blue eyes and a small nose. His hair is short and brown. His face is round. He has got blue eyes and a small nose. 16.His name is Spider Michael is thin very tall is really strong. His name is Spider Michael. He is thin, very tall and really strong.